Climate change is getting bad in Kiribati greenhouse gases are making worse the water is rising slowly. The weather is getting very bad so the people are in danger and are finding it hard to survive without water help them before they go under water. These families are struggling with no sun to grow crops and contaminated water they are scared. Thursday 14 March 2019
Climate change in Kiribati
Climate change is getting bad in Kiribati greenhouse gases are making worse the water is rising slowly. The weather is getting very bad so the people are in danger and are finding it hard to survive without water help them before they go under water. These families are struggling with no sun to grow crops and contaminated water they are scared. 
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Kaleb, you have mentioned some key points in your article summary on "Climate change in Kiribati. Note crops are not growing because of water contamination from rising sea levels, however there is still a lot of sun in the Pacific.
Well done Kaleb, you have identified two major issues relating to climate change and how it affects the people of Kiribati. You might like to focus on linking words to help the flow of your paragraph. Simple sentence starter, such as 'Because the weather is (getting bad) changing ...' or 'These families are also struggling because ......' A good way to edit your writing is to say the paragraph out loud to yourself. Mumble the words, under your breath. Say each word slowly, this will help you to delete or add words as you make each sentence sound better or sound grammatical.
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